“Hey Tim hey Tim!, said Mick rocking him up and down with worried he’s going to be late for school, harry harry it's already 8:49 am we have 7 minutes to get there.  Tim was as slow as a sloth trying to do his cloths. AAA with disappointment on his face as the kids went into their classrooms.

“Hey Mick don’t worry let’s just skip school for one day, oh ok said Mick pretending like he doesn't go to school, year that's the replied Tim excitement see we won’t get caught, let go to the park ok it’s just one block away .

Once they got to the park they saw seven dogs barking around the sand pit as if they monsters with small tails.  The people that are sitting on the chairs  were usually the owners of the dogs from earlier, the owners were as lazy as a cat .

When Tim looked at has watch it was time to go home and when they got home they both had dinner and went to sleep.

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